Thanks guys! I was/am very focused on making progress with this character. There's a lot to fix and things that could be improved, but I'll move on to the sword and her pose so I might be able to finish it in time for the challenge.
Here's what I've got so far, a real-time render in marmoset, going for a clean stylized look, at least that was my intention. I have yet to figure out how to do better lighting and shaders in marmoset.
Hmm, have to tweak the gloss of her face