FINAL | WORLDS | 2D | AJABU | hebronppg

hebronppg 2017-09-13 02:05:51 UTC #26

Hello @volenck , thank you for visiting my thread and giving your opinion. I am glad to hear your compliment.

The final phrase maybe not too far from my last image. Perhaps just balancing the color balance a little bit, and adding some details in here and there. However, all kind of suggestions are still opened, and I would like to hear and consider it if it makes sense.

flamer 2017-09-22 07:04:58 UTC #27

It looks absolutely gorgeous! My god I need to catch up!

I really like the silhouettes of the buildings, it's really a professional work. Plus those little details adds to the image a lot. I also like that where the sun light comes through the clouds it leads the eyes to the subject pretty effectively.

I'm not sure if that's a problem, but I've heard people talking about it's good idea bumping up the values because some people looking at at monitor besides daylight or strong lamp, in that case I think lot of the details would be lost. Actually that's what I'm struggling with the most.

Regardless your piece looks absolutely stunning! Also don't forget to post the high res image, As far as I know the min required resolution is 2048px for the shorter side of the image. ^^

It's a very good job so far keep it up !

hebronppg 2017-09-23 06:43:03 UTC #28

Hello @flamer ,thank you for your kind compliment, I am glad to hear that.

I think i agree with your personal opinion, it will blur a lot of detail, especially in the foreground area if I bump up the value. However, it just my rough opinion, i haven't tried to open outside my pc. I guess try to look on the other side, it will enlarge my sight. So I am going to look in a laptop screen/ my smartphone outside my work room, and compare the result.

Currently, I have been working another deadline, so I will back to this one later. I also want to say thank you for your reminder. This original image larger than i have posted here, so the 2048 pixel it would not be big problem.

hebronppg 2017-10-12 02:00:40 UTC #29

Hey guys, finally I have time to post my final..
So after I have read all your kind reply, then tried to consider some of your opinion, done a lot of trial and error I guess this is my final result.
Finally I want to say thank you and appreciate to you all who have visited my thread, in particular @jonatan-moonchild , @volenck, @flamer, who gave me useful inputs. I wish to see you again in next occasions or maybe in the next challenge.

So this is my FINAL. Below I also rewrite my concept story, so you don't need to go up.

AJABU
In the future, after a big war has been finished, there are survivors who save from big wars decide to build a new hope. Using the old ruined city as a base, they decide to build their home.
All in all, this is a new, an unfinished city, above the old ruins, where people who still have memories about how great their old days and deciding to build a new homeland (A- Jabu)

PS: Ajabu, personally I took this word from a local traditional language in Indonesia, Batak language. It is originally composed by 2 words A and Jabu ("A" means one, and "Jabu" means house). However, here I changed the meaning of house to a new hope/ home.

hebronppg 2017-10-12 02:39:48 UTC #30

My concept sheet

thakis 2017-10-12 07:10:08 UTC #31

Wow, great job! I loved your sketches and the end result is also great! Maybe you could add some extra subtle lighting on the left, but since you decided to end it like that, it' still very solid as a piece. Good luck!

jtuffdesigns 2017-10-12 16:39:17 UTC #32

It's great to see the whole process and how you got to your end result. Wish you all the best man

hebronppg 2017-10-13 02:36:43 UTC #33

@thakis @jtuffdesigns thank you man.

thakis 2017-10-13 07:31:54 UTC #34

Btw, I saw this in the rules: ''When you're done, add all your FINAL submission pieces to
your topic's first post and edit your topic title using this EXACT
format:
FINAL | WORLDS | 2D or 3D | Entry Name | Username''

I think you need to post your final pieces on the top if i'm not mistaken

volenck 2017-10-13 14:10:50 UTC #35

Hope you win this man, your work is amazing - this has turned out incredibly well. Thanks so much for all the feedback and help

obra-kalla 2017-10-13 18:20:57 UTC #36

Man, this looks sooo realistic, I just can feel the atmosphere in the city. There is a bit tenseness but on the other hand it looks so calm. I like the way you imbed all elements, everything is tight. Wish you all the best in the contest!

jonatan-moonchild 2017-10-14 07:27:21 UTC #37

You did great job here! I like overall mood of your image, composition, detailing - one of the strongest works in the Challenge, so... good luck!

Regards
Jonatan

hebronppg 2017-10-14 07:46:54 UTC #38

@thakis
I have posted my final version inside my first post. Perhaps u can go up and check my first post later. Thanks for your info

thakis 2017-10-14 07:48:56 UTC #39

Yup saw it, cool

hebronppg 2017-10-14 08:00:22 UTC #40

@volenck
Thank you for your feedback too. I also wish u grow up and do better in the next challenge. Let me know if there is another prospective challenge.
PS: I have also looked at your final. It seems better than my first time visited there. I also hope our jury don't look too much about minor details. Wish u all the best too.

@jonatan-moonchild Thank you man. I also wish u can finish your thread. I am looking forward to seeing your final

@obra-kalla Welcome my thread. I am glad to see your opinion. Thank you

jesperfriis 2017-10-15 13:10:02 UTC #41

Awesome work man

hebronppg 2017-10-16 01:47:03 UTC #42

thank you @jesperfriis

flamer 2017-10-17 05:53:41 UTC #43

Woah it turned out really nice! And you got my advice too C: I'm so glad about it. ^^ This is truly a fascinating work. You put a lot of effort in it actually.
Nice and even when the contest ends keep at making really great enjoyable works like this! ^^ Good luck @hebronppg !

malcom 2017-11-02 00:50:52 UTC #44

Really Awesome work.

hebronppg 2017-11-02 08:37:11 UTC #45

Thank you @malcom