Fun competition piece

Hey everyone here is what I think will be a finished piece (I often go back and retouch things over and over, a bad habit I am working on ) for a competition on deviantart for the movie series Unbreakable/Split/Glass. I really liked Unbreakable and love that Shyamalan made a sneaky super hero series.

Here is a link to the full version, and the accompanying story that goes with her. The competition link is near the bottom if other people want to join in as well, fun prizes to be had.

Full Version and story

Oh and any comments / criticisms are always appreciated, you can't hurt my feelings because I have 4 daughters, they have already torn down and rebuilt my self confidence well beyond what anyone else can do.