Mar '17

Hey! I'd look into values and how to direct attention to the focal point. It's really hard to read the forms you have since it's mostly flat in one shade of red/orange.

Mar '17

Thanks for the advice! Will definitely work on that. Do you think adding more contrast with rim lights will help?

Mar '17

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yaakov-weinstein

Yeah, showing the forms would help it read a lot better. For example, the tube-like structures don't really read as it's suggested because of the colors/values within the line work!