Oooh I really like the updated lightning on the girl! Its coming along really well! your corrections look nice though i think the shoulder behind the flower should be a little bit darker otherwise the values blend into the flower a bit.
A quick way to check value is to create a new layer on top of everything, set it to pure black and the layer effect should be color - like so (every once in a while i'd toggle that on and off to check my values):
Haha you could make this into a series XD the girl getting proposed to by different monsters XD i still think a dragon would be cool
Can't wait to see your next update! your art is so good!