Inktober 2018 critique

LesleyCarol 2018-10-07 16:33:13 UTC #1

I think it would be a waste if I didn’t get feedback for these. If there’s any way I could improve with anything let me know. I post everything, just a few from each week. Z

LesleyCarol 2018-10-07 16:35:00 UTC #2

malcom 2018-10-08 03:26:33 UTC #3

Besides the anatomy and proportions things that can be worked on. One of the big things I think you can start doing is work on your line weight.

Heres a good example to follow for future reference

I do love how you did the shadows for the shoulders in the 2nd drawing and the hair for the girls and the guy. Trying doing to more but for the rest of your characters when or if you have the time.

LesleyCarol 2018-10-08 05:27:11 UTC #4

Thanks for your feedback! I have to admit I've been scared to add weight and shadows. I'll try it for this week

LesleyCarol 2018-10-16 21:35:54 UTC #5

Here’s week 2! I tried adding more line weight, better proportioned hands, and more texture. Please let me know your thoughts!