Kamil - Art School Journey

[Lockenheim]

You did a nice job with these! In terms of the shape render I think you are correct, about going dark enough in the shadow areas. The cast shadows here are super dark. The two main things I did on this quick paint over was 1. add ambient occlusion under the shapes, without it they feel like they are floating in space. The sides of the pyramid and cylinder are in shadow so I darkened those quite a bit. The cone also has a pretty dark spot on the opposite side of the light. Overall you did a very nice job and keep up the hard work!

[WholeMilk]

Thanks, I see how I can improve my future studies now. I appreciate the paint-over!

[WholeMilk]

I'm working on shading and stuff, but in the mean time, I thought I'd try practicing poses again. I gave this one basic flat colors to make it pop more. I couldn't manage to make the face look good because of how small this drawing was, so that's something I'll keep in mind for next time. Feedback would be great!

[WholeMilk]

Alright, so today I painted an apple...
I think I did well on my color values on this one, but one thing I see I could improve on is probably my brush work. A lot of the painting seems to blend in really easily and it lacks contrast of sharper edges, so that's probably something I'll work on next time.
I'd really appreciate feedback on this as I haven't done much with color.
(I had an attempt at an apple before this but I realized it had a lot of mistakes, so I repainted it and came up with this one)

[marco_cprn97]

This looks good! Like you said I think there's a lack of sharper edges on the apple to suggest its volume but other than that the colors and lighting are on point.

[jasminerosepowell]

Wow your work is amazing! really like the movement in the figure drawings you do