I think it looks great! The harsh light on the first one really leads to a pleasing shadow render effect. One area i notice a bit off is ij the softness of the edges and the value (tending to be too dark) on some of the more matte textured cloths like the first shirt and the second guys lower pants thingy. Try going for a more diffuse gradual soft edge with a slightly lighter value on those to capture the texture better

Cheers

11 days later

Material study for this week, would love to hear your feedback on the outcome. I initially started out with man made materials like metal, bronze, gold and then went ahead with natural and organic materials such as wood, water, rocks and much more. Really had fun doing these and share my work process here.