The lines and finished tones for page 6. Still kind of playing around with how I want this to look but I think that I'm moving in a direction that I'm happy with and that is something that I can realistically achieve. One of the things that I want to tackle next is my panel composition. I don't think it's bad, it just lacks some sort of punch. I've been looking at a lot of manga for inspiration recently, they do some really great dynamic stuff with panel composition. And of course breaking out Making Comics by Scott McCloud, a book that I've had for over a decade and it shows
Might adjust the panel shape on those bottom two panels but one of the nice things about working digitally is that I can do that after I do the finished line work.