Hi! Welcome :smile: I am new in this course too hehe. For the figure drawing, for me, the cilinders are a little off.. I don't know if you understand me. Try to continue the figure of the model body a little bit more, look at his siluette. Hope this little draw helps you.

Keep practising!!!

Hi @mrlasagna! First of all, I want to say that I love your nickname hahah I'm italian and I know that the lasagna is one of the best things in the world :joy:
Your first assignements are great, but for the figure studies I think that the images are a little bit too small, I can't really see if there's something wrong or not, maybe the next ones could be a little bit bigger or maybe with different colours for the cilinders.
Bonne soirée :joy:

@mbarrasa16 Thanks for your drawing, i see now that i got the perspective wrong, will continue my practice today for sure !

@chiara.arcidiaco I made the images smaller to post here ( original canvas was 3000x3000 ) but ok i'll make them larger so i can get better feedbacks ! And, yes, lasagnas are one of the best things in the world ! Ahahah

Here is today figure drawing, trying to implement your feedbacks !

Thanks again :smile:

It's Saturday so i just made a quick one after Pen Control Assignement.

I think i got the legs better but not the arms....

Have a nice weekend all !

Hi all !

I had lot of work today so couldnt practice too much, but did anyway some pen control and a figure drawing.

For the pen control, i tried quick stroke, overshooting it, to try and make more straight lines.
Also changed "smooth" parameter to something like 30%.

Then the figure drawing, quite happy with it as i see some improvements.

Wish you all a good day.

Nice work so far! One thing that I noticed was that the lines you do to show the volume of the cylinders on your figures could use a bit more curve. Right now they feel too straight at times which kills the sense of volume.

Other than that keep it up! :smile:

Today's exercise.

I had a lot of work and had a bad day, didnt have time for further pratice.... And i'm not really happy with this one...

Tomorrow's another day !

your eye for color and hue are pretty spot on, good job on that assignment

Thank you Ghostmonst3r !

Still a lot of work today, so i had to make this only figure drawing, but i tried to integrate cedricgo advice and go with more curvy lines.

I still have some trouble getting those curves right.

Have a nice day, and practice good !

Hi !

Took some time to advance in the course and went on the proportion exercise.
If any has some feebacks/tips on this, i'll take it :smile:

Have a nice day !

feet and calves look a bit off. I too am a student so im not sure, but i think the feet are too small and the calves too bulky. I hope that helps.

As i put most of my exercises here ( and will do my best to continue ), here is today !
Had just the time for this as i going physically to work again, my "free" time just got reduced.
Tried to do the proportions exercice with just my first try as a reference.

Have a good day all !

Hi all,
Here is today's work. I tried to do the proportions without looking at refs, to see where i could get.
As always, any feedback is appreciated :smile:
Those two took me like 50mn, i feel like i'm really slow at the moment.
I also need to find some time to advance in the course.

I wish you all a good day !