Peter (not Parker :() Art School Journey

WeirdOwl 2020-09-08 14:49:39 UTC #41

I like the painterly look Peter. Makes the volumes read very well. Will you add the blue highlights to her from the environment? Or are you planning to keep her more cartoony?

chiara.arcidiaco 2020-09-08 15:38:38 UTC #42

ohhh yes she's turning out great One thing that doesn't convince me is the wall, maybe too bright? It doesn't seem a lot to be part of a night scene. But apart from that she is amazing

Frygidal 2020-09-08 15:55:05 UTC #43

Thank you so much <3

@WeirdOwl yes definitely, already added some blue overlay on her face but I am careful with this because she is already whole pink, don't want to make her look like bluish dead I will try maybe even with some blue multiply over whole her body, it often works really well with night scenes but I am trying to stay pretty bright as Marc always mentions xD

@chiara.arcidiaco definitely! I wrote under the pic that I will do whole background after I am finished with her :>

Frygidal 2020-09-10 15:52:50 UTC #44

Guys! I have painted whole background (first time painted clouds in my life xD) so I would really like to know what do you think!

IndrawnArt 2020-09-10 16:44:03 UTC #45

OMG dude! That looks so awesome!!!!! I love it!

chiara.arcidiaco 2020-09-10 17:28:08 UTC #46

peter..... this is great I said this in every step sorry I'm starting to be repetitive hahah

Frygidal 2020-09-10 23:32:18 UTC #47

I have posted final work on instagram, thank you so much for kind works and tips on this journey <3

Frygidal 2020-09-11 17:44:22 UTC #48

I got back to making 60s poses and I am trying to get only the most essential lines so I have a question if you guys recognise the pose or I do only because I saw the photo?

Apath 2020-09-11 17:47:23 UTC #49

I can see a guy with crouching with his back on the front of the camera.. for the head, I'm quite not sure, is he wearing somethin on his head?

Frygidal 2020-09-11 17:51:47 UTC #50

I will post a photo after some more guesses

WeirdOwl 2020-09-11 18:03:32 UTC #51

I see a girl squatting with her back towards us. I'm also confused on the head. Is that hair?

Frygidal 2020-09-12 01:05:15 UTC #52

Vika was closer but I need to refine shapes some more I see

I've done some fast feet study before bed (we arstists are strange creatures)

WeirdOwl 2020-09-12 01:29:11 UTC #53

Oh, I see. Without at least one line for a chair, it's difficult for us to register that there's a surface she's leaning on. But it was very close.

IndrawnArt 2020-09-13 08:21:43 UTC #54

It looks to me like it's a person sitting on something with the hands between the legs for support seen from the back.

chiara.arcidiaco 2020-09-13 09:21:50 UTC #55

I feel weird too when I pass like an hour just drawing feet hahah and I love this specific study, I wanted to start to do hands gesture drawing and feet also. And the gesture was pretty convincing, the image was equal on what I was thinking I like how you focused on feet, it shows where is all the weight of the body. Sorry I've said feet too many times hahah

Frygidal 2020-09-15 23:02:31 UTC #56

Thank you all for answering, I know now what to focus more when drawing gestures

I have worked some more on design of my mech after Marc's critic, what do you guys think?

haight_nicholas 2020-09-16 00:13:07 UTC #57

This really cool, and your drawing looks awesome. I might be TOTALLY wrong, so feel free to ignore me, but I think the head might be slightly too small. Did you also try it with the feet tilted down (as seen from above) kind of like the Term 2 Perspective assignment? If not that might be cool, either way it's worth a shot. This is a super cool idea though (your idea), I'm definitely going to try it out!

WeirdOwl 2020-09-16 00:54:37 UTC #58

Nice shapes Peter. He does read like a shark mech. And I do like the flats you put in. What will the inside of the turbines look like?

Frygidal 2020-09-16 01:06:33 UTC #59

@haight_nicholas no feedback is to ignore because if something is bothersome then it must be something behind I have sent this drawing for the stream, Marc said it's belivable but legs would probably be much more curved, maybe you will be able to watch this when he finally will get old streams to the youtube xD

@WeirdOwl thank you! That's very nice to hear because shark was an inspiration for both the pilot and the mech design there will be some laser lens inside, turbines are symmetrical because they can move the mech both onwards and backwards, lasers heat up water very fast on the intakes of the turbine and the pressure difference throw the water/steam to the other side making the force to move the mech (that's my science fiction :D)

WeirdOwl 2020-09-16 01:16:44 UTC #60

I like the laser idea! And that you thought through the movement. May I have a suggestion then? What about putting like an extra battery or a generator on the mech's back and have some power cables go to the turbines? I feel like this would make them more connected to the design and add to the believable effect. Feel free to ignore me, since I have no idea what the overall design looks like in your head.