Good to see more peoples interested in Landscape, and welcome aboard. First thing I can say is, really solid improvement in your first image.
One thing that could be your next step is making the balcony that the girl is hanging on more defined or believable, and of course the overall landscape of the city as well. But you definitely kept the old scene within the new scene.
I have been throwing this video a lot around, but if you're interested into more in-depth context over ways to do landscapes, check out this video :
Look forward to see how you progress in coming months.