Well, pose and frame are both static
. To make image more dynamic we can use angled horizon, dynamic pose and 5-point perspective + more dramatic light with. Here is my quick sketch, just to illustrate the point:
![](https://d1s0ws440m13mk.cloudfront.net/original/3X/6/7/67058d8ef4f2f9686fc15d4f0afdefdf630d8709.png)
I like the colors, but values are not realistic.
When light is hard to guess, I usually look up references. Or even better - make my own reference, with lamp and camera ![:sweat_smile: :sweat_smile:](https://d1f4appuj81sj4.cloudfront.net//images/emoji/emoji_one/sweat_smile.png?v=0)
I would say drawing and values!
Your image is accurate and clean, and you probably know your software well enough.