Mar '19

Just a basic item/food concept piece I accomplished, I really enjoyed coloring this one.

A 2hr painting I did, not really fond of how it turned out and think some more work could be done, maybe add some more lighting on her.

A female Knight character concept I began, I am really digging her design so far! Open to any suggestions or opinions :smile:

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cedricgoModerator
Mar '19

I really like where you're going with this character. The design is cool and I like the colors you're going with. There's only two things that I noticed that I think you should check. The first one is the perspective of the body. For the most part I think it's actually fine, except for her shoulder and chest area. THey seem to follow a different perspective than the rest.

I think it should look more something like this

The second thing are her legs. They look really big and long for her body. That may be a stylistic choice that you're going for, but if not, then I think something like this might look more realistic in terms of proportions .

And one last thing I just noticed, but it's more of a design preference, but I think she could use a slighlty longer skirt. It'd be unfortunate that everytime she fights she exposes herself :smile:

Hopefully I wasn't too nitpicky and that it helps you. I really enjoy where you are going with this character and I'm looking forward to see the finished concept!

Mar '19

Thank you for the help! You're definitely right about the shoulders and chest area so I'll absolutely do some work on that. As for the legs I know they're rather long but that was as you said a stylistic option as well with the dress. But I shall definitely toy around with her outfit some more as progress continues. I really appreciate the feedback :smile: