I was wondering if someone would help me out with this. I put a question mark on where I wasn't sure if it was quite right and the photo without the lines to make it easier to see.

From what I undestand the scapula is way to the side because the arms are raised, but it feels like it has too much space where I put the question mark. Does it look right?

Those muscles stay in place even as the shoulder blades are raised up so they should be bigger. Its hard to see I know, but extend them where you placed the ? mark. Hope that helps, get a second opinion if still unsure.
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