Nov '17

Hey, you did great on your second assignment! Your pen control could use a little work though c: Try changing the speed at which you draw? Try drawing lines very slowly, then like you normally would and lastly try drawing fast lines. That way I learnt what the right tempo is for me to get straighter lines and circles, so perhaps it'll help you too?

Nov '17

thanks! I realized I was in a rush and didn't really take the time to focus on what I was doing when I was working on the Pen control assignment.
Thank you for the info.
I'll use it moving forward.

Nov '17

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datsjustb

hey, I think you have a nice work with the image combining assignment. The reds and yellows make a strong atmosphere and the centered composition balances it quite good imo. I would maybe make a desaturated haze over the sun so to make everything go together well and add some realism. Also it wood brighton the blacks in the building what seems off to me.... My opionion though :smile:

2 years later

Aug '20

well here are assignments 1 and 2 again I'm just starting back on Art school and wanted to start posting my progress and stay in the loop this time