Jun '18
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Ay up! I'm Julia and I've never been a part of any community at all, so I feel awkward enough about it... but im happy to join it :smile:
I work as a hairdresser (survival reasons) :scissors:
but I been drawing whole my life and now i finally have an opportunity to get better at it :blush:

So here we go

This is the 1st pen control I ever did ( I did em almost every day for like 20 days i think; really really hate drawing circles)

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this one is mid point, pen control number 7

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Number 20

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I think i messed up that alien a bit, but couldn't be bothered about it coz these assignments I was doing at work :grin:

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Again with this one I dont know why but I couldn't manage 4th picture

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Jun '18

These look very nice! Your control over the pen definitely improved after 20 days :grin:
Your work on the human proportions are also good! I like that the added musculature. However, as you mentioned yourself, I think the the shoulders do look a little odd, to me they look way too big. Also the hips seem to be a bit narrow. I think the drawings could look much better if you widen the hips a little bit and make the shoulders less bulky (or go all out on bulk for the rest of the body). These are just my two cents!