Finished lineart. Any feedback before I move on to colouring appreciated. First time inking digitally. Trying to borrow J.Scott Campbell's elements for drawing the figure.
Dec 14, '20
Dec 15, '20
Hi! My biggest concern is the head tilt, but you can change it up pretty easy to make it more believable. I made a really quick correction that I think looks better.(It's not exactly accurate so I suggest you change it up more) I hope this helps ^^ Keep up the work! 
Other than what Castonia mention, I think you can also work on the composition and other anatomy parts for the character. 
I recommend these things:
Maybe making the legs a bit shorter. Push the hand more forward and even make it bigger for that more epic feel with the fore shorting. The back arm anatomy is almost there. I highly recommend if you have a roommate or family member to take a picture in the same pose to get an more accurate anatomy reference. You can probably play with the cloth as well.
That's it for my feedback.
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