WIP (need advice)

[sammymartins]

Hello there!
I'm already in the middle of another wip but well, this is actually a college essay haha..
I'm doing a character sheet, which will be vectorized, so the lines need to be quite clean .
I'm using photoshop CC and I'm actually liking the results, but it's taking ages!! I'd really appreciate software suggestions since I'm not used to lineart at all hahaha

Critiques of the Character design would be greatly appreciated as well, I'm here to learn and share whathever I know after all !

Ps: I know that the profile one is missing 2 acessories, (I forgot lol) but I'll fix it.

[newmand]

Hey there! For drawing in vector I recommend you to use Clip Studio Paint (Manga studio). As for the character I like third sketch as its drawn, the pose and its proportions. For first two sketches I recommend to work more on proportions to make him look more "gnomy" or more human, and to work on silouhette overall. And as for me he is holding the rifle not quite well In first sketch, you need to work more on pose and perspective. Good luck!

[sammymartins]

Hello!
Thanks for the advice, I'll definetly give it a try! As for the anatomy, I never really drawn a dwarf hahaha so I looked on a lot of different references and they might have gotten a bit mixed out n.n''' but I'll try to make it better! The rifle really bothered me a lot as well hahha I just couldn't find the right angle but thanks for the advices, I'll try and make use of them!