Looks pretty amazing!
In my personal point of view the chest should be a little bit higher. And it would complement the general shapes to add something right on the back of the neck and something else to add shape on the scapula. I think that zone looks a little bit flat.
I'll choose position #1 or #3 if it's gonna carry more weapons.
Hey man! Really nice job overall, my main feedback would be to organize your colors in a way to emphasize the focal point of your character (the head/torso) more. Right now it's a little hard to read with all the details and the colors everywhere.
Forgive the crappy mouse "paintover" but this is what I mean:
If you squint, the read should look more like the gradient there, directing the eye where to look first.
Anyways, dope sculpt!
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