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Hello Art School i joined the program Marc created so i can become a better artist. Here i am posting some things that i worked on today i apologize for all the NSFW images i did censor them. I was practicing the topics covered in Term 1. Specifically i practiced the cylinders the skeletons and the action lines. Any feedback would be wonderful thank you
These are the skeletons and the action lines practice
These are the cylinders practice
I don't think you have to censor nudity on the forums, but your line of actions look great keep in mind that they don't have to only go as far as from the top of the spine to the butt so don't be afraid to include the legs in there as well if the line flows there when you do more full-body poses.
Your ribcage circles are either too skinny or not large enough to fit the whole body it should be wider basically but the height should stay close to the same on most of these. some of your ribcage circles are too long height wise and your pelvis circles are good for the most part as well, but keep in mind the pelvis circle is a horizontal egg shape basically no matter how the body is moving.
some of your cylinders could also imply roundness better so make those cross contour lines more curved on some of the figures that you drew over. great work so far and welcome to the forums!
Hi and welcome to Artschool! As mentionned above, you don't have to censor your pictures. Nudity in your references and artwork is okay on the forums, as long as it's not sexualiy explicit.
Yeah i can definitely see how i made those ribcage circles so wonky i think if i had lowered the opacity it would have been easier to make them the right size. Also yeah the contour lines look flat which if the picture wasn't there would make it hard to figure out what direction they are pointing.
If the ref wasn't there then it would still read it just wouldn't show a whole lot of depth if that's what your asking
