Hey, I'm looking for feedback for this illustration. This is fanart, for fun and practice. Tell me what I can improve. C&C are welcome. Thanks!
Feb 19, '20
Feb 20, '20
Hey, I think its a really nice painting. The only thought I have is if the silhouette of the character could be somehow improved. For example in the leg area, maybe letting her left knee stick out of the silhouette a bit. Also her right arm which is overlapped by the hair is a little hard to read, how it attatches to the body. Personally I would probably also move her other arm a little bit lower, to make the free space between her armpit and arm a bit bigger.
Only small changes, other than that I really like your picture! The character is nicely rendered and the added background scenery is nice too! : )
Thanks a lot Pistonhit!
Thanks @Pistonhit I'll try fix her right arm, here is quick overpaint. Maybe this way? 
Yes, I think thats better : ) glad I could help!
Ok, here is final version (new right hand). I decided to finish this work and start working on another stuff.
