ART WAR | 2D | Demon Lord Nazgoth | Pregium

rgdraw 2017-01-19 18:07:08 UTC #41

This is great! But i feel like he lost a bit in charism, maybe make him bigger now that there is more space for him ?

GreyHound 2017-01-20 04:12:20 UTC #42

I was thinking he should have more focus as he's the subject, the composition is great but if you would enlarge him, it'll make all the difference.

glubglubz 2017-01-20 06:23:31 UTC #43

I like B because the tiny human in the foreground is not at all threatening or worth Lord Nazgoth's attention.

I think your composition would be better if you followed the rule of thirds more. Push the building and human down farther and push Nazgoth up a bit higher. That would make his entire body more visible and remove some negative space.

Pregium 2017-01-20 10:16:23 UTC #44

some comp tests

alykam 2017-01-20 14:29:02 UTC #45

I like where you are going, but think you lost yourself a little bit translating the chosen composition sketch to these more rendered tests. In my opinion the camera should be lower, closer to the ground, and closer to that guy, thus making the Demon Lord bigger and more menacing.

Something like this:

Pregium 2017-01-20 15:14:43 UTC #46

started rendering a bit, this could be a composition upgrade , it's a little bit more dinamic, persp lines are more exxagerated , lowered the cam enlarged the monster.
the previous version gave more the idea of the church passage till open space,(plus i like the sort of symmetry) i will sleep over it one night to see if i prefer the pov out of axis.

Pregium 2017-01-20 15:51:48 UTC #47

Did a quick comparison to choose wich comp to go with, hoping morpheus bring me advice

glubglubz 2017-01-22 06:38:07 UTC #48

Definitely A

Arulan 2017-01-22 10:30:06 UTC #49

A. definitely stands out as the best.

Pregium 2017-01-31 12:12:22 UTC #50

Update!, painted the BKG

albek 2017-01-31 12:16:57 UTC #51

Nice palette, very alien and unsettling : )

mr_dessin 2017-01-31 12:22:22 UTC #52

Wow ! Awesome background !!!
Really dig the colours

Pregium 2017-02-01 22:57:24 UTC #53

Updates! rendered a piece of the Foreground

rgdraw 2017-02-01 23:01:17 UTC #54

Getting better and better

Pregium 2017-02-03 18:46:20 UTC #55

Update, rendered moar FG, next will be the two characters

sir-lex 2017-02-03 21:22:08 UTC #56

Wow, this looks really good! Keep it up!!

Scoops 2017-02-03 22:00:16 UTC #57

Are you a fan of frank frazetta? sick work!

rgdraw 2017-02-03 23:23:42 UTC #58

Awesome !

Pregium 2017-02-06 16:04:39 UTC #59

actually i do am

Pregium 2017-02-06 16:08:24 UTC #60

Updates!, inserted an additional level of fg to push depth, added minor props and started rendering the beast (that's hard) still have to polish the additional fg tho