ART WAR | 2D | Velora the Warbringer | Steve_Kim

HorizonDweller 2016-12-30 02:31:17 UTC #21

I like your design a lot, i think that the mask will play a fundamental role in your character so , TAKE CARE OF THAT.

Steve_Kim 2016-12-30 02:33:16 UTC #22

@HorizonDweller hey, thanks for your input you are right, and i'm definitely going to spend some time figuring out exactly what I want on that mask

HorizonDweller 2016-12-30 02:34:20 UTC #23

@Steve_Kim Great job so far , its gonna be tough having your champion against mine once finished

Steve_Kim 2016-12-30 02:38:50 UTC #24

@HorizonDweller masks ftw thanks man, cheers!

Steve_Kim 2016-12-30 12:02:18 UTC #25

Decided to stick with number 5 I refined and cleaned up the initial sketch a bit, and decided to explore some color palettes I may end up going for.

After some feedback, I definitely feel like the mask should be revised, so I will be doing some head sketches this time round, and maybe even changing the design of her head.

Any opinions and feedback will be valuable, please feel free to comment! Cheers

yorieofthecastle 2016-12-30 12:10:45 UTC #26

The second one is amazing! I really like the shapes the values create. Perhaps the horns could contrast a bit more with the cloth, like in the 4th one.
Maybe the gold colour could be slightly brighter/lighter (for all of them), more like it looked in the mask concept sketches?

mavkrogan 2016-12-30 15:34:13 UTC #27

Woah! You managed to differenciate the character! Looks awesome!!! I need to learn to do that with my ref Good work!

superkip 2016-12-30 16:47:19 UTC #28

Wow, awesome designs! The shapes and the colours are great. I love the headpiece.
I prefer the middle two colour pallettes.

Iago_Cavalcante 2016-12-30 17:17:59 UTC #29

For me, 4.

She is a evil godness, i think she needs a darker palette thou maybe black and red? Don't know, but these look great.

Steve_Kim 2016-12-31 01:11:53 UTC #30

@yorieofthecastle Thanks for the input! Will definitely keep that in mind Cheers!
@mavkrogan Glad you think that way haha still need to explore the head and the mask, will be posting them soon. Thanks for the comment
@superkip Thanks for your opinion!
@Iago_Cavalcante Oooh, I think that's a great point. Will definitely keep that in mind for future progress Thanks man!

sanguine 2016-12-31 04:17:18 UTC #31

1 or 3 in my opinion:)

twistedxp 2016-12-31 07:27:20 UTC #32

Oh man this is looking pretty fancy. I'm really digging 2 and 4. I sort of feel like the mask is in need of a little heavier design to really bring it out.
Great progress so far!

Steve_Kim 2017-01-01 10:49:26 UTC #33

@sanguine thanks for your opinion!
@twistedxp thanks for your input! currently i plan on working on more head/mask designs and sketches, just to see if I may end up with something more interesting

cjmrsh90 2017-01-02 16:54:51 UTC #34

Great work Steve! I really like the idea of the golden mask, I recommend looking at some old masquerade and theater masks for some inspiration quick pintrest search will show some AWESOME ideas to get the brain flowing. Cant wait to see more!

kinonato 2017-01-03 01:53:15 UTC #35

Nice work, I would recommend a half mask, I always love to cover the face half but exposing either the sexy lips or the soulful eyes, but your full mask is really tempting too, maybe some element of Chinese opera but not too "Drath Maul-dy", let see where this captain steer this ship.

Steve_Kim 2017-01-04 00:39:03 UTC #36

@cjmrsh90 hey, thanks for stopping by im glad to say that what you suggested me was exactly what I was doing.. PINTEREST FTW haha thanks for your input

@kinonato hey, thanks for your suggestion! I was exploring more masks and I think I actually might change the design to a half mask I will post my next progress asap.

Steve_Kim 2017-01-04 13:08:47 UTC #37

Hey guys, finally found time to work on this

So I finally found a design I actually liked, and decided to go with it because due date is about month and half away, and I may get super busy, so i figured i should move on and work faster

Still having trouble deciding which color palette will be best, so im definitely going to need your opinions! Thank you guys in advance! Cheers

Pregium 2017-01-04 14:11:50 UTC #38

7, 8 suits the war theme better.
if i may, she looks more a princess rather than a goddess to me, i would consider some "divine features" (levitating orbs for example or Theros's stars inside gods) to give some hint, maybe a glimpse of her powers (weapons? pet?) costume design looks fantastic tho

Steve_Kim 2017-01-05 01:00:53 UTC #39

@Pregium hey, thanks for your input I wanted to keep her design relatively subtle as in 'not so obviously goddess', but I agree with ya on adding "divine features" I think I should make that more clear in the illustration, since i'll be showing her magic and her summons there thanks for your valuable feedback!

nevs38 2017-01-05 04:30:27 UTC #40

3 & 5 look beautiful!
5 especially can be experimented heavily with a nice touch of gold & white satin!