promising start dude :smile: I'd try out some larger armour pieces or weapons to really make the silhouette distinct.
Also a bit of a nitpick, but I think for early concepting it's best to stick to a more solid feeling brush. That shoulder armour on page 3 looks great, but otherwise the drawing feel like they've been blurred sideways and it's hard to see a clear silhouette.

Thank you very much for your comments and feedback!

I agree: the brush I used for these sketches make things tough to see. I shall tighten things up in the next set. :smile:

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