11 days later

Jan '19

Was a good attempt at Erlend. You should try to really bring out the character of your design, The hero shape is not bad at all.

Her props could be enhanced to really pop and make her unique, Some things that can be worked on for next time are her belt (shiny eyes or the like), the wing itself (not too sure how it attaches itself)

And Her Staff, not sure how the pieces are connected X).

Jan '19

Illustration is definitely getting there too! Just be careful with your perspective, You are flattening it out too much and it loses all the depth.

You should definitely experiment with some rough comps to get a feel of what might tell a compelling story, Keep improving man!

Jan '19

Thanks for feedback, appreciate it :smile:

For the staff its supposed to be connected by ligament. As for the wing it was more like it's infused in to the character's scapula, but should have made some hints/explaining/showcase for it in the post. Will work on the composition and that :+1: