Only just got to coloring tonight. Cleaned up the sketch a bit too. The main idea is there, but I might still play with the color of the glow on her headpiece since I'm not sure I'm 100% sold on the cyan. Her clothes will look less latex-y in the future as well. Regardless, I'm really excited to start rendering this!

Really nice! Great work! :smiley:

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Thanks for the kind words you guys!

Here's an update. Mostly just figuring out colors/light, adding details, and separating elements. Her head looks a little large, so I'll be shrinking that down tonight along with her left forearm. That'll make it so I can actually bring the hand in the way I'm imagining it. I want to get the little tweaks out of the way before I start really rendering so it doesn't slow me down later.

Feel free to critique at any point as well

Great! Awesome progress! :smiley:

Another update, worked up the background a bit last night. Wanted to get some more done with the water but ran out of time. Will resume tonight, hopefully. That left most wave felt a little off to me, so I'm kind of playing with the spin direction as I go :smiley:

Great progress!! The left wave may feel that way because it's a bit too straight for a wave adding a little curve to it would fix it, but don't worry you're doing really great!! :smiley:

I think you're right, I'll warp it a bit to see what happens! Thanks!

That camera angle and the energy of your shot is amazing! Also great separation/readability of all the elements! Good luck with the finishing! :smile:

Messed around a bit more with the wave based on the feedback. Eventually decided to just make it a crash because I didn't want to spend all night on just that one spot. Not 100% on it, but it'll work. If I have time later, I'll come back to it. Started rendering the material on queen, as well as resized the arm/head, finally.

I think I'm gonna place a dude leaning over the edge of the boat where the viewer is. I'll put his head where that wave is so I can hide it. That'll solve everything :smile:

Amazing progress!! And the idea of adding a character in the front is pretty good, it'll also add even more depth to the piece! Great work! :smile:

Good job finishing! I feel like it could've used a bit extra detail, it's an amazing piece but personally to me it feels a little unfinished. The clouds are a nice touch though and help to center her a bit more

Amazing work!!! She looks incredible!!
And the guy in the foreground was a brilliant idea! Shows how big she really is!

Showing some good stuff in this one.
She looks like she'd fit right in in an IP such as League of Legends (Low-key always wanted a more offensive water champion). Admittedly, I can't help but to wonder where you'd have taken this with even more time, but I kind of get an idea from, say, her left hand 👌.

@nesokaiyoh I agree with you. Fleshing things out more is something I'm still working on improving, especially with limited time. I can only get better from here!
@rgdraw Thanks! Those last minute additions come through sometimes haha
@morecado That's some high praise! Thank you

Amazing stuff! The composition really shows off her power!