Hello there!
My name is Bato.
I am on sketching stage)
My profile: https://www.artstation.com/khlaalu
Dec 24, '19
Jan 26, '20
This looks wicked. Is this just the design sheet or will it be your illustration? If it is your illustration, you'll want to zoom in the camera so you can get a much better look at your champion. I'd love to see them in more detail.
Hi, this is only concept, it is esier to develope character like this. Composition sketches will be further.
Seems like a lot of people are doing fire characters. Love how these look so far! That figure on the right particularly looks menacing.
Thanks) About fire, yes, it's by default is already cool)
14 days later
Final line. Next step is base color
I'd be tempted to mess around with the size of these characters here - you have a lot of negative space and not much in it. If they were much bigger they would appear to be coming towards the camera and it would be far more dynamic (then we can see the juicy details)
Yeh, what @nesokaiyoh said. The negative space is holding back the impact of the champion. Maybe rotate the scythe around or move it's position back so you can pull the action to the foreground? It might require reposing/redrawing the arms to match.
