ART WAR 4 | 2D | War of the Elements | The Baron of fire | artbrychko - Forums

artbrychko · Jan '20

So far I'm doing character concepts, which is better man or woman ? How do you like the idea of such a character?8)

nesokaiyoh · Jan '20

Personally the ideas you have for male and female are very similar so it's probably just better to stick with the male at this point although it's up to you lol

In concerns to feedback, proportion wise your dude's head is far too large, and I think you could push the gesture and silhouette of the character (i.e. bigger shoulders) and the final sketch looks pretty promising so far!

artbrychko · Jan '20

Thanks for the advice! I agree with your review , I will try to finish ...

artbrychko · Jan '20

I continue to work on the concept, in the process the hero became like a moth ... can so to leave?

tobiasrafaelb · Jan '20

I really like the armor design!

artbrychko · Jan '20

Thank you nice to hear 8)) ! of course it will need to be improved...

artbrychko · Jan '20

Hello ! I'm still working on the composition , and I plan to make some more variations . Until that me like 1 option and 5 (on color ) 8)

artbrychko · Jan '20

I continue to work on the project, now I'm in search of a composition here is one of the options to choose from )

nesokaiyoh · Jan '20

Whoah this is awesome man! Not composition feedback, but the piece would harmonise better if there wasn't so much full saturation in the piece. Perhaps if you toned it down in a way to bring attention to his own saturation it would help. It's pretty but quite hard on the eyes. The way you've painted the body is looking really appealing

artbrychko · Jan '20

Thanks for the advice ! I agree it is necessary to dim the colors ...

artbrychko · Jan '20

I decided to change the composition , in this version the character will be more understandable, also edited the character design itself. Removed the extra armor . Once I do the spirit of fire that huge armor is too much , perhaps will stop there for this version , I will try to work out . At first I didn't really know what I wanted to do for the contest .That's why I have such different sketches. Now I'm more confident about what I want to draw .

artbrychko · Jan '20

I can't choose between 1 and 2 ... Which one do you like best ?

brandoncrampton1 · Jan '20

i personally like 3

aypersc · Jan '20

I like 2, the composition and the camera angle looks amazing! Very dinamic

artbrychko · Jan '20

Thanks! I'll work on it again !

artbrychko · Jan '20

Thank you very much! I am only concerned that the character is not very readable character ... . I'll work on it.

yazziixx · Jan '20

I think 3 is the best especially with the light blue secondary color makes it stand out a lot !

nesokaiyoh · Jan '20

I personally like 1 or 3, the design in the first is a nice development, reminds me a lot of Devilman Crybaby, great show

artbrychko · Jan '20

This is a process , this is not the end result, I hope to improve a lot more . There are still quite a few problems with the composition ...

artbrychko · Jan '20

I will be very happy to hear your suggestions for work development, criticism or advice