Interesting !
Can't wait to see what you'll update next.
I really like both versions. 1 is more ghost style than water , this color pallete suggets that( and also lack of water splashes). Composition remind me more like a classical paintings. The dress design is cool, it's nice that the breasts are not exposed. The fact that there are few diffrent animals suggests that every animal can be created.
2 is more like riot style maybe. Color tone is more water style. I hope there will be more animals. The transition beetwen character body and dress cuts too much. In version 1 is more natural.
Very cool works! Both versions are great.
DUDE! This is AMAZING!
To me it looks like you did minimal work on the piece, yet it already looks so promising and nearly professional! I think its focus on her face/mask that gives the piece focus!
Also, I would try to make this composition even more dynamic, and enhance the "attack" idea, simply rotate canvas a little bit to the right, so it would seem that she has a higher ground and is pointing a littlle bit bellow herself to the enemy, as her water beasts descend upon them like a giant tide/tsunami or something!
Super amazing dude, I will really need your help when i will reach the point of illustration! 
Second one is definitely more dramatic...but I also like the first.
10 days later
Thank you all for your support and advice 
I'm now marking time. I don’t know how to continue working, I want to maintain a gloomy atmosphere and want to make bright accents, but I don’t like everything that I get. Again, I want to start all over again. 
12 days later
I really love the first one, she is so emotioal and good looking, it tells a story to me ;3 Hope you will chose the first composition
I decided to start over 
It will never end.
Nice new start !
Hope you have time to finish it.
And I totally understand the "I can't make any progress on this specific art" T-T (we probably do all haha)
10 days later
Update...
Keep going this is looking great! I really like all your previous versions of this as well, has a very renaissance feel to it, good luck!
Thank you! I will try to finish in time
Made the picture more saturated and I think to add algae
Good work, algae and tentacles really helps set the place under the sea , maybe a couple of bubbles would give the final touch.
Thank you! I agree with you, I want to add bubbles a little later
Vladislav Orlowski
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https://www.artstation.com/drunkengopher
I've finished 
Wow, awesome work!
Thank you!
