@malcom
That would be a pretty cool idea but I'm not sure how I could depict something like that in an illustration haha. Thanks for the input!
@nightblue-art
Yeah I definitely see what you mean. I 100% agree with you, the piece does seem too zoomed in.
Thank you for the feedback
Alright so I decided to re-do the sketch for the illustration.
The first version seemed to zoomed in (as pointed out by @nightblue-art) and did not showcase the character too well.
The new version put's more of the focus on the character. I also wanted the mask to be a strong focal point as well, since it is a very important part of the character. I felt like the previous composition didn't do a good job at that since most of the mask wasn't showing.
Anyway let me know what you think of the new version, your feedback is always appreciated!
@mr_dessin
@rgdraw
Thanks! I'm glad you guy's like it so far
@rgdraw @Iago_Cavalcante @ESL @Steve_Kim @HorizonDweller
Thanks for the kind words guys! Glad you are liking it so far!
@Steve_Kim Sure! I can do that with this piece.
Sooooo I decided to redo the piece once more.
After taking a break from the piece for a couple of days I looked at it again and didn't really like it anymore. I felt like the pose was too stiff. This guy is suppose to come from a tribe of fire dancers so I feel like the pose and composition should be more graceful and flowing if that makes any sense haha.
I spent some time reworking the pose/composition some more and came up with this! The idea for this was to have the character ascending from the ground while performing one of his special moves - fire dragon summon.
Overall I think this one captures the character a lot more then the previous.
Let me know what you think of it.
@jnmobley
Thanks!