Heya,
I like the theme and storytelling quite a lot. There's a couple of issues I see though:
Careful with your horizontal and vertical line. It's especially noticeable in 1-point-perspective when they are off, as they should be perfectly parallel instead.
The backwall is incorrect. When trying to find the plane of the back wall (indicated by the blue arrows) you'll find that the size of the plane would be about what I painted in orange. I've also drawn in where your backwall would sit, if it were the size you drew it.
So basically, your room under the walkway would be inset into the backwall, but the beams on top indicate otherwise.
A way to avoid this is to follow the convergent, horizontal or vertical lines from points in space where the position is known (for example the corner or edges of the room.
yeah, I'm all good I've just been really strung up lately. My schedule was getting really overbearing since I'm doing track with school right now and also trying to balance that with my daily schedule was all a little too much. so I decided to step back a rebalance things and it seems that things might be getting back to normal. But I didn't stop drawing in my sketchbook so at least iv'e been slowly improving. So I should start posting again soon
This is looking really good cody! Looking really fantastic! Nice thickness on all of the windows! The only thing that sticks out to me is some of the lines on the front face of the building have different angles on them which makes them look a bit angles. I think if you can get these parallel to eachother it should help it look tighter. Great work Cody keep it up!