Mar '22

Heya,

I like the theme and storytelling quite a lot. There's a couple of issues I see though:

  1. Careful with your horizontal and vertical line. It's especially noticeable in 1-point-perspective when they are off, as they should be perfectly parallel instead.

  2. The backwall is incorrect. When trying to find the plane of the back wall (indicated by the blue arrows) you'll find that the size of the plane would be about what I painted in orange. I've also drawn in where your backwall would sit, if it were the size you drew it.

So basically, your room under the walkway would be inset into the backwall, but the beams on top indicate otherwise.

A way to avoid this is to follow the convergent, horizontal or vertical lines from points in space where the position is known (for example the corner or edges of the room.

Mar '22

Thank you very much for the critique, I never noticed the things you pointed out until now. although it did look a bit funny to me and I couldn't figure out why. But now I know and will apply this to later drawings, thanks.

25 days later

Apr '22

Hi Cody.. it's been a while since your last post, I hope everything is good?? :blush:

Apr '22

yeah, I'm all good I've just been really strung up lately. My schedule was getting really overbearing since I'm doing track with school right now and also trying to balance that with my daily schedule was all a little too much. so I decided to step back a rebalance things and it seems that things might be getting back to normal. But I didn't stop drawing in my sketchbook so at least iv'e been slowly improving. So I should start posting again soon

10 days later

Apr '22

I'm finally back, I took a break from lessons while I sorted out life stuff but I never stoped drawing. I hope that I can get back into it and am looking forward to joining my fellow students once again. here is one of my assignments.

Apr '22

I also couldn't quite figure out how to make a brush in procreate so any tips are welcomed.

Apr '22

Glad to see you back! Hope things are going well! Keep up the good work. I am not familiar with procreate unfortunately.

13 days later

May '22

I finally got around to doing some three point perspective.

May '22

why thank you, I'm working on my 2 point perspective assignment right now since I never did it correctly so I should be posting that soon.

May '22

this is my splendid attempt at two point perspective It went a lot better than the first time. as always critique is appreciated.

May '22

This is looking really good cody! Looking really fantastic! Nice thickness on all of the windows! The only thing that sticks out to me is some of the lines on the front face of the building have different angles on them which makes them look a bit angles. I think if you can get these parallel to eachother it should help it look tighter. Great work Cody keep it up!

May '22

thanks for the feedback I will try my best to keep my lines more parallel. I also hope you have a great day

May '22

I probably spent too much time on this today without looking away so there's bound to be mistakes. here's my 3 point perspective so far

May '22

this was my attempt at shading the piece and adding some color. I also have the shaded version by itself. I know I have a long way to go but critique is welcome.

May '22

thanks, I'm quite happy with how it turned out but I definitely need to work on color and shading.