Jul '20
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hey guys this was the rough sketch of my piece. I'm currently working on building a portfolio for college.

This is the refined drawing

I then started working on the foreground I had a really hard time with the grass just because I've never painted grass.

after that I worked on the tree, its still not done but I just showing y'all where I'm at currently.

I would appreciate any type of feed back because I want to improve on my weaknesses and on any areas that I have missed :).

Quick update on how it's going.

I think I'm done I just wanna show y'all the end result. Please leave any feed back I would greatly appreciate it. If you feel that something is off or a area that I could improve please let me know.

malcomModerator
Jul '20

So far I like this a lot. The only thing I can recommend is adding something on the left side of the illustration. I like how in the first sketch there was something there occupying the space at the top. Maybe adding some birds flying in the distance can work. You can also get fantastical to make the piece unique in a way. Totally up to you there. Maybe something else you can look to doing is adding more graphic breakup to the tree. Add some light shinning threw the leaves onto the characters can be a nice cliche thing to do. I'm bias, but, I always loved seeing that. Looking forward to more updates.