I added a bit more contrast with the darks and highlights on the coat as per Marc's critique today and I think I'm going to call it done.
That didn't take very long though and I spent a good portion of the day looking for cool objects on pinterest to use as concept fodder. I recently saw a bunch of art of people making characters out of random objects and I decided that was cool and I also wanted to do that. So here's my first attempt at a monk type character based on some ring I found. It's still pretty rough but I like the direction it's going.