Oct '16

Looks good. Nice and dynamic.
I think her stance is a bit unsteady though and her back leg looks wonky. The leg cannot turn that far inward when her hips are facing the other way. She would look more balanced if her back foot was more paralel to her front foot. Also, I think the arm going back is a bit short and the perspective on the other arm needs some more work.

Oct '16

Thanks for the feedback :smile:
I decided to look at my mirror and put myself in a similar pose haha.

The twist in her back leg was intentional; wanted to make it more dynamic. But I guess it makes it look more awkward...

The arms definitely need work; Need to do perspective study ^^

Thanks, again ^^

Oct '16

Yes, the arms and feet look much better already!
The foreshortening on the gun looks good, but I can't really tell what's happening where she is supposed to be holding it.

Oct '16

Thank you ^^ I'll try to get it done by tomorrow almost finished :smile:

Oct '16

In that case I think the hand looks fine as well. I can't wait to see the final piece. :smile:

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