@sparksofdawn @jonatan-moonchild @snakebearer, Thank you very much for your comments! I do feel inclined toward no. 1 as well. I like some brutal heavy feel in it. But I also like something in no 2. I was wondering how those design may look in illustration and tried to incorporate them in composition. Here is what I have got:
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1a. Same but with flag.
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Let me know what you think!
That should become my slogan for now!
Thank you, @Acolet! Well, I feel that movement of his hand doesn't work well with the overall busy image. I tend to think that with all the pikes and flags moving around, the figure of the general should be calm and static. So most probably I will go for variant 2. But still it may worth trying head turned toward the "sun".
I definitely feel that no. 2 fits better into illustration composition than other designs and considering time constrains I decided to move on with it.
For now I played around with colors for illustration. I do understand that it is pretty rough and character colors are not certain but I just want to have a feeling of overall mood.
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Nice twist and cool armors!
My only critic would be on the banner graphic design. The logo looks greeko-roman and consequently match neither the shape language of your characters nor your illustration. Maybe you can have a look at some japanese mon (the skull on the horses rear could be a strong logo).
I hope you will keep some sharp geometrical shapes in your final illustration.
Good luck with the ending!
@innocent Thank you very much for your critic! I totally agree that the logo is off the overall style. I will rework it for sure. In illustration not many changes are expected as due to personal circumstances I will have only one evening to get the job done and post the final result. So I will still be focused on overall impression rather than polishing details.
Excellent work!
I'm really impressed with what you can accomplish in such a short (for me) time. Your speed vs. quality ratio is one of the things that I admire in your work. In fact this is one of areas of improvement that I've set for myself for near future, so I can say that you are exemplar for me.
Anyway... It was great to see you in action once again!
Best reagrds
Jonatan