FINAL | ARTWAR 2 | 2D | Moira O'Clock | Innocent

[infintas]

O.o that composition looks amazing. I love the wooden look on her face! Are you going to give the "Victims" a terrified looks?

7 Days to Go :D!! Good luck!

[roque_leao]

Very good! the gesture of art we sensational!

[angiekatneko]

For an old lady I find her very pretty some how haha, it's looking awesome!

[blacktorne]

I love the design of this! The moray/angler fish with the lantern is really cool and I liked the way you handled the pose with the crutch. Good stuff!

[innocent]

Hello!
Here is my last post before the final, hope you enjoy looking at low resolution picture :^)
I decided to crop the composition to get more focus on the main character. Still a lot of work to do during the weekend, yeepee!

As per usual critics and comments are welcome and super usefull.

@rgdraw Simer! 3 days to go. 3days!!! Congratulations on finishing your artwork within the deadline.
@meonika Great advice, it helped to dramatically change the thing. Enjoy!
@tbrk Thanks, We can do it! Good luck for the finishing straight line.
@infintas Sorry, i changed the composition, ahah. I'll try to give them a more terrified look. Thank for the encouragements!
@roque_leao thanks, hope to see you soon in another contest
@angiekatneko Ahah, thanks for her. She wants to meet you tonight for dinner. I don't know what it mean.
I will not disapoint you @blacktorne !!!!!!!

[sparksofdawn]

It's amazing!
Seeing how you welcome critiques (I'm really nitpicking here :D) - maybe define the handle of her crutch/staff/stick-o-doom a little bit (like you did the rest of it), because right now it's merging with the background and I had to do a double-take at her hand/ how exactly she's holding the weapon. Maybe you're simply yet to finish that part.
In any case - really really cool! Good luck!

[rgdraw]

Thanks dude!
Yeah it's almost done, can't wait for the final! Good luck

[glubglubz]

I agree with @sparksofdawn about the stick-o-doom handle, but it also looks a little transparent in the body where it overlaps her cloak.

If I were to be super picky I would also mention the ripples from her leg and the angel resting in the water. It looks a little too sharp and empty. Maybe just add a few more lines like you already have and then use smudge or liquify on the parts that are under the water.

Overall I think this turned out great. I wouldn't be surprised at all if this is one of the winners. Its an interesting idea, a cool design, lots of personality, and painted very well. Good job!

[meonika]

I'm glad i was able to help And i just love your crazy woman and the illustration's mood. Good luck! i hope soon we'll see the final illustration

[angiekatneko]

I accept the invitation, tell her I'll bring a pie haha
The illustration is looking better and better, wish you the best of luck!

[silartworks]

I like characters expressions and the mood overall represents the darkness, so far really good

[jouster]

I like the expressions, they work as the focal point catching the attention of the scene very well ,and i also like how the challenge theme, light vs dark, is represented in the illustration, that's pretty cool, great job

[clarief]

Your final design is looking pretty nice! Great job! I actually like her expression a lot XD the whole environment fits that dark theme. Again great job!

[innocent]

@sparksofdawn
@rgdraw
@meonika
@angiekatneko
@silartworks
@jouster
@clarief
Anybody up for a coffee? :^)
Thank you all \o/

[ggampugi]

OMG. She is literally AWESOME!! Great work!!!

[sparksofdawn]

Congrats on finishing! Now, officially - she turned out awesome!
(P.S. long live coffee)

[norahlatona]

Awesome work! Turned out amazing!!

[rgdraw]

Haha! Sorry but I don't drink coffee, but hot chocolate works ! x)

Congrats for finishing! Great work dude !

[meonika]

Sorry, i'm a tea girl
You've made the awesome illustration Great work with the lightning, colors and the composition. And i don't even know, who is cuter this girl with crazy look or her fish with huge sharp teeth

[silartworks]

Well done! Count me in for some catpuccino