@evehartman Thank you. I thought the red was pretty. c:
Happy with it so far. Probably going to take a break from the illustration to work on concept sheet.
@ferguson-clarissa Thank you!
Really cool design. I can really see that you're great at what you're doing. ^^
I'm trying to give some constructive crits, but it's kinda hard here. Everything is great. ^^
Only thing I can see, and that's after digging pretty deep into the bottom of the barrel, is that there are a few tangents you probably could fix. >.< Most glaring one the arm and leg in the illustration piece.
Hope that at least help you push it even more.
@snakebearer Thanks! I think I see what you're saying about the arm/leg tangent. I had to look up what a tangent was so my understanding might not be great lol. Just to clarify though the bottom left (her left) arm and the left leg are tangent?
Yeh, the leg is tangent with both the lower arm and hand. Since it turns just at the same line where the arm also turns. And you can even see the lines of the finger just follow the leg line as well. My suggestion would be to just lasso the arm, place the anchor point in the elbow and turn it slightly. Like I said, this is being nitpicky really. XD But since you're already doing so great, it'd be a shame if you didn't do all you can with a little push.
@snakebearer Definitely appreciate the feedback as well as explanation! I made a tweak so hopefully it made it better.
For the time being I'm calling the illustration done.
@mr_dessin Thank you! I was wondering which corner of the internet you ventured off to. xD
@morganpaints Thank you! I'm pretty satisfied with how I managed my time to work on both; I struggled with it during the last art war.
@meonika Haha, yeah definitely not a good guy but I can totally see how it could be viewed that way. Good luck to you as well!
@mr_dessin Totally, I feel ya. I have a bunch of stuff over the past year that I've just doodled but will likely not see the light of day. xD Occasionally something works out though.
@kantan Thanks! I'm okay with it being strange, it was fun lol.
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