FINAL | WORLDS | 2D | Concrete Paradise | valentinbusch

valentinbusch 2017-09-29 18:15:57 UTC #1

My Idea is To depict a modern City, that has been almost compleatly submerged by water. Only the hingest points still peak out.

These are my First few scetches:

Please give me your honest opinion. Im Open for Suggestion.

valentinbusch 2017-10-01 19:10:29 UTC #2

WIP Update:
I starten the Illustration with some Color and a Rough Form Lay in.

valentinbusch 2017-10-02 19:27:12 UTC #3

WIP Update:
I started detailing the focalpoint.

valentinbusch 2017-10-04 11:34:03 UTC #4

WIP Update:

More Details and background.

valentinbusch 2017-10-04 15:09:12 UTC #5

WIP Update:
More Details on the Creature and the water.

ranarh 2017-10-04 15:30:37 UTC #6

I like the work so far. The waterline needs to be straight, not curved like this. I suppose you've looked at photography with the waterline in view, but maybe look for cool blurring effects you can employ. We also don't see so much ofthe underwater strctrures yet, I suggest you place greater emphasis on either in our out of the water. Looking forward to more!

valentinbusch 2017-10-11 07:20:44 UTC #7

Thanks for your Feedback. You wehre totaly right, that the focus was a bit all over the Place. I cut a Little Portion on the right side of the Illustration, so that the Building on the right wouldnt be in the Middle of the Frame Anymore. I alsow added some Lights in the background to the dinstant City to empaphise that there is live there. The over all Focus Now is on the over water Part of the world.

valentinbusch 2017-10-12 15:55:23 UTC #8

Final Sketch page:

valentinbusch 2017-10-12 15:58:28 UTC #9

Final Illustration: