so I was going for a young yakuza recruit im new to drawing full-body characters and ill try my best to get better at it using the courses iv purchased ... I hope u don't mind critiquing my work.
Feb 17, '20
Feb 18, '20
awesome job first of all, i am not yet near your level but i will try to see if i have something to help.
I think the right hand of your character hiding behind the body, it is not really obvious what is supposed to be doing. i think the rightshoulder needs to be a bit further back for the hand to come in at that angle or your forearm is a bit too short. Or the hand is too big, it reads a bit confusing for me in that area.
the right chestmuscle folds beneath your rightarm, so it should follow that instead of going up towards the collarbone.
I could be wrong though, so if anyone could confirm this that would be great. Or you could check for yourself.
Maybe also write down what your doubts are about the character or what you like to improve , or what you like to have critiqued.
i like the tattoos a lot and how you textured the muscles of the character.
Great character overal, would like to see him in more threatening poses as well 
I hope it helped somewhat atleast.
Good luck!
Your observations are very helpful indeed am not good at anatomy yet but im steadily evolving ,since i do believe that good anatomy comes after learning figure drawing.
I like the way the character feels balanced and not too stiff. Thank you for your reply from today on ill be practicing until reaching my goals (hope youll do too).good luck
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