Oct '17

Love the movement on your piece, one thing I would say is to add the dramatic shading you’ve done on the muscles to the face. Reference always helps me for anatomy and stuff. 😊

Oct '17

Really liking the dynamic angle/focal length on this drawing--the sense of movement is great too like @jack_cook_2020 mentioned. One thing I noticed though is the size of the right hand in relation to the knee. If you look at this side view of a person sprinting like he is, you'll notice that the hand would actually be closer to the camera than the knee, so the hand should be much bigger!

Oct '17

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jack_cook_2020

Thanks for the feedback! I took your advice and redid the face a little, adding more detail to it. I was initially going for a blacked out face due to the way the light was shining from behind, but after adding the details, I'm glad I took your advice; looks way better!

I saw another person suggest I increase the size of the hand due to how a person's limbs are positioned when running, but I can't find that comment for some reason. I did follow that advice however, and again, it looks better lol.

Thanks for the advice! Your input is really helping me improve.

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Oct '17

great movement! and I like the colors, some cool color(purple) shading on the muscle might help you