I have a first draft of the story linked here if you want to give it a read. I think I'll be changing things around. Any feedback is good feedback. So if have any thoughts while reading it, please post it. It can be about anything. For example, if you think I should take an idea from an anime or movie, write that down. If something doesn't make sense, write that down. If you have your own idea about the magic, write that down.
Also questions are great as well. Questions can be on anything.