Hey, you tried, and that's how we learn to make better art. I'm in a similar boat in that I'm not entirely satisifed with the piece I'll be uploading later today (you already saw it, just the one with the guy chilling in the grass, it just feels to plain), but it's still part of the journey, so we'll just make the next one better.
The kid ink looks really nice, and I bet it was good practice. The pants texture by hatch is a nice detail.
this other path piece does look better. I personally just like things that are more "clear" and easy to digest at a glance. Is that intended to be like smoke rising in the distance?