Yo that context is great! Inspiring stuff, makes me want to go and do some as well!
If I'm honest, I'm not feeling the flames at the sides, I feel they take away from the eclipse in her hand which looks great and is even better given then story. Maybe if they were a different color so as not to take attention from it? something cooler maybe? like they're flames of her own, or she's cooling flames? Just thinking out loud.
Overall, wouldn't giving her cooler colors work to show her feelings faded as well? Kind of like the frost girl you did previously?
It's looking better though, already looks much better than the previous post iteration.