Sandworm snacks

[eternalcod]

Working on this piece inspired by Frank Herberts Dune. Arrakis is one of my favorite fictional places (wouldn't live there though) and sandworms are interesting, like a cat size of a god, you just have to learn to live around it.

To do list:
Shapes and light on dark cloth
Texture and details on the worm
Blending character on the right into the environment
Sky details
Light

[eternalcod]

Update!

I am a bit unsure what to do with the characters. Especially the guy on the right pops out too much, and how to make details with dark values is a bit of a problem.

[lord-milo]

Nice, i like where it is going.
I think that the composition works well like this.
Maybe you could blur some parts of the image at the end, to create a little bit more depht to it.
And i would paint a person next to the vehicle to show the scale better. ( I think you had one in your first sketch?)

[eternalcod]

Eeeh... Been trying to get the sky to work, it's not going very well. I added a third character for scale and it works better, thanks @lord_milo for the suggestion.
Two versions that i like best so far. I wanted to make air quite dusty.

And without foreground dust.