Sebastian - Art Journey

LesleyCarol 2021-07-24 23:48:30 UTC #334

Sorry, I mean anywhere in your picture (including the background), don't include the whitest white. The first thing I did was change the value of the background. The value in the back is as important as the drawing because it shows the type of environment the item is in, even with basic studies.

Da_Bingus 2021-07-25 00:06:09 UTC #335

OHH Alright that makes sense thanks! would you like me to upload my circles and connect the dot exercises? Actually U know what here there are

PS: I did them on 200% zoom I always to those exercises as a warmup

Da_Bingus 2021-07-25 21:00:22 UTC #336

Hello! Like I said yesterday I did some eyes structure exercises!! let me know if you see any mistakes!

Also I shaded the mouth I'm actually very happy with it!

alrooke64 2021-07-25 21:21:36 UTC #337

great progress seb, keep going! loving it!

Da_Bingus 2021-07-26 14:27:01 UTC #338

Thanks alot! I'm trying my best I'm not gonna stop no matter what

LesleyCarol 2021-07-26 14:43:37 UTC #339

These lips look good, huge improvement from the previous ones.
When you trace the eyes I would try to use 3-d shapes instead of lines. With eyes, the biggest issue we artists have is showing the form of the eye. It think it has to do with how thin the lines are and the eye lashes don't help. Try drawing the sphere for the eyeball and 3-d forms for the lids.
In addition to Angel's videos, these show a good way to break down/trace the eye with form.

Da_Bingus 2021-07-26 16:15:46 UTC #340

Hi! I was planing on drawing all day after work but I got a call from my second job that they need some1 so Unfortunately I wont be able to draw that much today so I only did basic exercises

Da_Bingus 2021-07-26 22:36:40 UTC #341

Once again Thank you a lot for this very useful tutorial I will definitely use it!!!

sorry for the late response I was working all day I just came back (I had like an hour break that's why i drew before)

When I was drawing the structure of the eye for the first time I used Marcs anatomy video I didn't use any angels tutorial for those eyes. BUT I will definitely draw more structured eyes from now on! And I will follow your and angels tutorials But I'm very fkin tired from working all day so I just don't have the strength to draw today but I will definitely draw tomorrow!

Da_Bingus 2021-07-28 00:24:16 UTC #342

Hi well damn got a call from my boss and had to go to work so I was at work the whole day rip.

Da_Bingus 2021-07-28 18:08:55 UTC #343

Hi!
Finally after 2 days of working all day I did some eye structure studies
I think it looks good let me know if its incorrect

Da_Bingus 2021-07-28 18:59:57 UTC #344

did some more structure exercises BUT this time with out tracing

LesleyCarol 2021-07-29 00:29:15 UTC #345

These are looking good! These are showing a lot more form.

For the first one I'd say try to go along more with the brow bone. The top of the structure is a little flat.
For the second set, #1 is looking good but try to make the lids curvier. Notice in the example, the second drawing the lids follow more of the lid shape. The first one sets of the structure and the second one emphasizes the shape while trying to keep the structure intact.

Also, one small thing to notice is that the top lid curves out more near the inner edge of the eye, while the lower lid curves out more near the outer edge of the eye.

Da_Bingus 2021-07-29 19:57:37 UTC #346

Hi! traced some more eyes I will work on freehand eye drawings tomorrow

Also tomorrow I will start using angels structure guide for eyes!

PS: I know I used too big brush that's why it doesn't look too good mb

LesleyCarol 2021-07-30 01:49:47 UTC #347

Nice! These definitely look better than yesterday's

Da_Bingus 2021-07-30 15:19:26 UTC #348

Hi! I said yesterday that I will do freehand drawing but friends happened and I didn't had that much time to draw so I decided to trace.

BUT this time I decided to use Angels tutorial let me know how it looks!

LesleyCarol 2021-07-31 03:31:07 UTC #349

These look great! Be careful with making the iris too small and highlight too big, but other than that I can really feel the 3-demesionality.

Da_Bingus 2021-07-31 15:54:47 UTC #350

Hi! Today I did my first eyes freehand! Some of the lines are a bit rushed since I did it before I had to go to work BUT I think it turn out quite good

I'm so happy that summer is about to end for me so I can focus on drawing more

LesleyCarol 2021-07-31 23:26:21 UTC #351

You did great with capturing the forms of the eyes. I think it would be better to use curved lines for the eyebrows at the end to be more accurate, but if you want that angular style I won't stop you.

Try to be more precise with the circles for the eyeball. Don't move on until the circle is close to perfect and use the shape tool if need.

I made a redline to go over the other points.

Hope this helps!

Da_Bingus 2021-08-01 01:09:47 UTC #352

Hi @LesleyCarol thank you so much for that feedback!

And yea the only reason I did those angular eyebrows because to save time because I didn't have alot of it I was literly drawing like 1h 30mim before work so I was kinda speedrunin it but next time I will definitely use more curved lines for eyebrows

Also next time I will definitely be more careful with the position of the iris

mau.wamp 2021-08-01 13:51:58 UTC #353

Good job on the eye studies, Sebastian!
Just a general piece of advice: take your time with your studies, if you are short on time, its better to not completely finish it and keep on working it the next day than to rush the process.

Understanding these basics is hard and it takes time, make sure to really get them because those basics are what will make your works look „good“

I am really stunned by your recent progress, I really like your determination!