18 days later

Hey, I tried the suggestions and felt comfortable enough, that I just started the next part of the course (Nude Figure Drawing).

Again the first assignment with the suggestions you gave me (draw faster and use the whole arm). After looking up how to use the arm and holding the pen I think I found a comfortable way of holding the pen and barely use my wrist anymore in these assignments. Also I deliberately try to speed up the lines. I still struggle a bit to follow the lines at the circles with more speed, escpecially in the second half where I "push" the pen (I'm left handed and draw circles counter-clockwise, so the right half when going up from the bottom point).


Then from the first assignment the color Adjustments. I tried the last one quite a long time, but couldn't get it better. I can see, that some parts are off, but since all operations should affect the whole image, I couldn't find the perfect balance:


And last some first tries at finding the action line.
As I saw from other posts nudity is okay for this purpose? Also I hope it's okay that I use these images. I got them from https://quickposes.com/ and just used the "Free model poses" library there. It just sais you shouldn't use the in my work, but since the page is for training purposes I guess it's okay.
If either one is not okay, I will delete them right away. Please just tell me in this case.
So here are the tries. I would like to know if I'm on the right track with those before going further and adding the marks for head, ribcage and pelvis.

so for your line of actions, they don't have to only extend from the base of the neck down to the butt nor do they have to follow the spine exactly either. You could definitely push those lines of actions more and if you see that the line extends/flows through the body to the arms or legs then don't be afraid to follow it there, other than that great work and the Mei adjustment is very hard and almost no one gets it 100% correct so don't worry too much about that.

Ah, I see. Thanks for clarification. I rewatched this part of the class and tried the assignment again with the same models. This time a bit more by feeling. I think I focused a bit too much on the explanation the first time. Here are some examples that are a bit different to the ones before. Most of the others just extended in comparison to before.

Is this more into the direction it should go?

these look a lot better than last time, but the fourth to last one you can break that line of action down into one smooth line instead of two, great work!