ART WAR 3 | 2D | Heroes | Alize - The Light Bringer | krizevil

krizevil 2018-11-23 08:24:07 UTC #21

A knight without a sword is like a samurai without a katana, so I'm sure my character will have one big sword.
Today I started sketching some basic shapes, not sure yet, maybe I do more sketches later or rework the best of these options, which one is the best? any suggestion is pretty welcome!

rgdraw 2018-11-23 10:36:00 UTC #22

Haha yeah you'll get used to it don't worry it's normal to feel a bit lost at first

You're swords are nice but they all remind me of existing swords, try to go a bit more crazy with the shapes, it's fantasy you can do anything! You can do it!

sanguine 2018-11-23 12:31:03 UTC #23

B is my favorite

sparksofdawn 2018-11-23 14:44:35 UTC #24

I like B and some of the handle elements from A. I feel like a zweihander type sword could fit her overall theme

Gil_Ascher 2018-11-23 14:55:57 UTC #25

I really like b's flow but I also like E's dragon like shape at the base also I really like A's handle! great work! they look fierce!

krizevil 2018-11-23 19:44:15 UTC #26

@rgdraw Thanks! yeah I feel the same, I like E and B mostly but they need to be more unique or they'll need pretty cool details so I'll be trying new things later
@sanguine Thank you, good to know it!
@sparksofdawn Thanks! I'll have it in mind, the best would be a sword that she can use it both ways, two handed or one handed because she will have a second physical weapon to use her power
@Gil_Ascher Thank you! yeah my favorite is E then B, I'll need to make some changes taking both as base : )

rgdraw 2018-11-23 23:11:08 UTC #27

You're welcome, I'm sure you'll find the right details for it

katya_cyan 2018-11-24 11:28:56 UTC #28

Amazing! I like E,C and B

mr_dessin 2018-11-24 11:40:48 UTC #29

E or C blade, with B guard ?

krizevil 2018-11-24 16:23:26 UTC #30

@katya_cyan Thank you so much for your suggestion, I'll have it in mind! : )
@mr_dessin Thank you, that's a nice combo! : D

krizevil 2018-12-02 07:05:13 UTC #31

Well it's been a long time since my last update, I've been pretty busy but I need to catch up so for now I did some rough sketches trying to find the right pose and composition so later I can do the character sheet based on the final image.
I'm sure I want to do an action scene because that's the kind of stuff I don't do often so I'll be out of my comfort zone and maybe I shoot my foot but hey it's called challenge for a reason so let's see how this goes.
B and C I think are the best, D is a fail XD I think I was tired maybe, so I think I will go with B unless something better comes along the way, let me know if I'm choosing right

sparksofdawn 2018-12-02 08:34:08 UTC #32

Looks awesome, I like B as well, A could work as a cautious, battle-hardened (and a little tired) veteran ready to go into battle, surrounded by enemies but for an action shot - yeah, B seems best. The left arm seems stiff though in the composition shot. Come to think of it, the whole body seems a bit tense, but it might be due to the arm. Maybe she could be aiming at the right monster?
In any case - looking forward to more epicness ^^

rgdraw 2018-12-02 11:32:54 UTC #33

Really nice progress !! Starting to look really good!

krizevil 2018-12-02 20:09:35 UTC #34

@sparksofdawn Thanks for your suggestions, yeah I need to fix the pose a little bit, maybe it's the arm that you pointed out or the legs, I'll check what's wrong, I like the angle shot and perspective so I'm gonna try to play more with enemies and composition, I hope to have some free time the next days to work on this : )
@rgdraw Thank you, glad to know I'm on the right direction : D

rgdraw 2018-12-02 21:10:32 UTC #35

You're welcome

Gil_Ascher 2018-12-04 14:19:12 UTC #36

The scene looks awesome! love her feel, she looks strong!

edenriquebq 2018-12-07 08:21:53 UTC #37

I like a lot how it looks already in the scene

Maybe a combination of that pose with the torso and above from A to make the arm shooting more prepared to do so or in a posture gesturing it's shooting?

Love her armor!

krizevil 2018-12-08 22:20:31 UTC #38

@Gil_Ascher thank you so much, I'll try to do my best!
@edenriquebq thanks a lot for your suggestion, I'll have that in mind when I fix the pose!
Sorry guys for the late reply but I've been pretty busy but hopefully I'll have free time next week, I need to catch up with this challenge soon, cheers!

edenriquebq 2018-12-11 23:11:44 UTC #39

Best of luck!
Also cathing up here
Cheers!

krizevil 2018-12-25 08:32:09 UTC #40

Hi everyone, I've been too busy this month so I'm not sure if I can make it on time but at least I'll try. I'm working on the composition and trying to decide about the enemies, I'm going with monsters/beasts for now unless I change my mind...