thanks for the feedback! I might tweak around a bit with #4 to show some type of superpower going on as @mr_dessin gave the idea becuase i agree it is a pretty badass pose going on would be a shame for it to fall short
setting up the the layout for the concept page, its still in wip but this is the general layout of how i want to present the character, currently im about to work on back of the character color and the character render to get everything set up to finish the first part of the contest and then move on to the illustration and spend most of the next couple weeks working on that, so excited for how its been coming out :D
5 is really cool, it tells a story that matches your concept, an angel in an environment she doesn't fully belong to, she's visually surrounded by the city yet still maintains a distance with it. Your story has allows a lot of option in terms of composition storytelling, there's a duality to your character, she's not from here, yet she's been deeply transformed by her environment.